REMARKS ON W QUESTION #3 Here are some things I wanted to write on many papers. Keep in mind when doing your revision. 1) Redefining the betweenness relation does not change the incidence axioms at all, so it is not necessary to reprove them in detail (although they should be mentioned). If you did state or prove them, there's no need to erase them now. On the other hand, B-1 and B-2 do need to be checked in the midpoint interpretation. 2) The model we are working on contains ALL points of the Euclidean plane, with their standard distances. So, it should be easy to give a counterexample to B-3 without a lot of fuss. It is not necessary to build the counterexample out of the points you exhibited to verify B-2. 3) Start out your essay by stating clearly what the model is -- in particular, the new definition of "between" and "*". You can't assume that your reader is looking at Greenberg's book.